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Open Poetry #3

Come On

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

0 posted 1999-10-31 12:58 PM

Come On

Come on, love, let us not wait forever
Hiding behind uncertainties, they blind us
Bind us

Without you all is monochrome
Your colors painted prismatically
Dilate, then diminish

Connection, invisible string
Stretching taut, a straight line
Between us

Willing the dreams to reality
Envision us
Come on, love

Come on home
(c) 1999 Corinne Bailey

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 1999-10-31 01:04 PM

Corinne,
OK so we sent him home. Nice poem.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-10-31 01:09 PM

Very nice, Corinne.

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Denise

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-11-02 04:55 PM

Nicely done.

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