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Hope |
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Dom Mart Member
since 1999-08-17
Posts 164Florida |
This tree is rooted in gossamer watered by tears of porcelain birds trading sorrows on their frilly branches. Not thunder's strident rant nor floods infecting guiltless soil nor ice sheathing silvered boughs amend its upward course. It has no fruit to bear no seed to drop. It nothing serves except the reaching up. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh, I do like this and it likes me  |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
What wonderful imagery If only my hope was this strong..... ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Oh, another one I truly like. Very good imagery. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Dom. I enjoyed this! ------------------ Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dom, I'm impressed, enjoyed the read. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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