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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA 
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Hey where did the ground go? I know it was just there! I turned around and saw a sign that only said BEWARE This road is "Under Construction" but why? It was just fine! I guess some things need fixing up like your life and like mine. Sometimes even the biggest things we often do not see. So some roads do need fixing up like the one that leads to me! For my life's road hasn't been perfect I am sure that you'd agree. So my sign reads "Under Construction" until the new me you can see! ------------------ ~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~ [This message has been edited by Echo Rhayne (edited 10-31-1999).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice, Echo! But just remember, we're all under construction until the day we are no more on earth! You're not alone!  ------------------ Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Reminds me of that shirt or saying "God isn't finished with me yet" Well said my sweet friend. As I am in that crowd of Under Construction also like Denise stated. |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
I say... We are all diamonds in the rough taking years being polished and buffed. Nice work on your poem...great anology. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss it, you will land among the stars.~Les Brown~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Just a nice smile for this one |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
I must agree with Denise here- I am always looking for ways to improve myself. I will never be done, because if I am, that means I am perfect in my own eyes. Anyone who is perfect in their own eyes is a God in their own eyes. And anyone who si a God in their own eyes is truly nothing but a self absorbed fool. ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- [This message has been edited by Systematic Decay (edited 10-31-1999).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Melanie I'm glad you made the changes you did. That is cool. I'm also glad you didn't listen to me last night when I was so sleepy! I'm glad you kept that part the same. |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
I like this poem. Would hate to think that my "under construction" comes to an end before I do. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Good read! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cute write |
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