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Open Poetry #3

this morning

mia
Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 118

0 posted 1999-10-02 10:58 AM

I woke to your sleep
this morning
soft echoes of deep breathing
I inhaled your body
and consumed the moment
that you would wake
to all this love
that binds us
I waited an eternity
through these seconds
that passed slowly
until you opened your eyes
and smiled at the morning

as I write these words
you kiss my neck
and hold my breast
in your warm hand
our long day begins
moments to pass until
you can make love to me
again, tonight

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

1 posted 1999-10-02 11:29 AM

a beautiful morning as will be a beautiful night.....lovely mia

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 1999-10-02 11:38 AM

This is good mia! Reflection of a moment in time!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-10-02 06:07 PM

I love the images and felings this one evokes in me

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 1999-10-02 07:06 PM

Mia, this is really beautiful

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 1999-10-16 09:36 PM

Very beautiful!

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Denise

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

6 posted 1999-10-16 09:52 PM

Thank you, Denise, for resurrecting this one. It is beautiful.

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