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Echo Rhayne
Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

0 posted 1999-10-30 11:50 PM


I just found out that while I was gone in the hospital my friend posted this poem for me as a response to a challenge by WhtDove...She just recently told me about it and asked if I would repost it here. I personally do not like this one, and I think it could have been better written...so if you dont like it either, that is just fine!

I was lifted up on Angel wings
and on Angel wings I fly
up to my heavenly home
with Jesus...in the sky

I'll receive those precious gifts
he promised me so free
from my Lord, Jesus christ
who gave His life for me

I'll rejoice with song
to Him forever more
as I enter His kingdom
through Heaven's door

And with my grateful heart
while down on bended knee
my soul will sing
with wonderous praise for thee

I'll walk along Heaven
on those beautiful streets of gold
forever to worship,
love, and behold

The mercy of His glory
and of His saving grace
and the life of love
and freedom upon His face

How grand this journey
will surely be
'cause Jesus gave His life
because of His love for me

My heart will sing forever
even when I die
for I will be lifted up on Angel wings
and on Angel wings I fly!



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~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~


© Copyright 1999 Echo Rhayne - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 1999-10-31 12:06 PM


Well, I thought it was a beautiful one!
Echo Rhayne
Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
2 posted 1999-10-31 12:11 PM


Thank you! You havea BIG smiley face there ya know. I like my teeny one though I could make a big one if I wanted though see


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~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~


Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-10-31 12:17 PM


This is so lovely, Echo, I remember reading this before when you were in the hospital. Thanks for reposting it!

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Denise


WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 1999-10-31 01:53 AM


LOL at you Echo. I can make a big one if I want to...LOL
Munda
Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
5 posted 1999-11-01 04:16 PM


But I do like it....a lot ! : )

[This message has been edited by Munda (edited 11-01-1999).]

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 1999-11-01 05:31 PM


Loved it the first time round, and even more so now.
Echo and WhtDove, I want to make a big smiley face too!!! Seriously

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

7 posted 1999-11-02 04:05 AM


Nicely done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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