Seasons of Life (for Denise's "Our Seasons")

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Open Poetry #3

Seasons of Life (for Denise's "Our Seasons")

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

0 posted 1999-10-30 11:34 PM

Seasons of Life

I've seen the spring of life pass by
I sit and wonder why..that I
can't dwell in the spring of life....oh my.

Now the summer of life is here
it won't last long I fear...oh dear
things are in motion, life's in high gear.

But fall is not too far away
so in summer I'll stay...to play
never mind the leaves I raked today.

It's so cold with the fire out
there is no strength to shout..or pout
keeping warm is what life is about.

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-10-30 11:40 PM

This is great Robert! Once again you say so much with so few words (I guess it's a special talent!) (now...how do I put this delicately....WHERE'S MY MONEY?)hehehehehe

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Denise

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

2 posted 1999-10-30 11:46 PM

check's in the mail Denise....in the mail!!!

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-11-02 05:26 PM

Enjoyed the read!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

4 posted 1999-11-02 05:36 PM

Good one! Interesting way you did this! The double rhyme in the second line.

Check's in the mail...A line if I ever heard one. heheheh

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

5 posted 1999-11-02 06:05 PM

Wonderful Robert....
"so in summer I'll stay.....to play"
speaks volumes....mind if I join you? 's'.......

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-04-25 09:58 PM

yes it is

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