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Open Poetry #3

Last date with Autumn

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-10-30 03:30 PM

The thirsty stars licked water out of puddles
The crispy breeze roamed through the lonely streets
I chewed my cotton candy, and the clouds
Would disconnect into the tiny threads and bits
The restless night would lean against my shoulders
The streetlights shinned directly in my eyes
But nothing passed my skin, my flesh, my fortress
I walked without a care, like hypnotized
So here we are and this, our final date together
Let’s make it seem eternal and unique
And I shall wait for you, for worse and for the better
Afraid to hear “good-bye,” we do not speak

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I fell in love and kept on falling

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-10-30 05:59 PM

Very nice Master. I enjoyed reading this.

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Denise

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-10-30 08:13 PM

Great read Master

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

3 posted 1999-10-30 11:05 PM

Thanks Hoot and Denise!

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