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Rico Junior Member
since 1999-10-29
Posts 20 |
L. Javar E. Time The center of our attention *the star* By which our world revolves yet Measured by how our world revolves He is always on schedule with His own agenda that waits for none Uncontrolable: he is a continual calculated By some of the greatest minds ever And often kept by the least Mystical: He is the one true medicine Able to mend broken hearts and Wounds from the game of love Father is our straight edge by Which all are judged by The precise duration of a moment by The span of his children's Life. ------------------ Bon Appetite! |
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desperado Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 312FT Hood,Tx |
a unique poem to say the least, yet I can't feel anything from it. it doesn't really stand out to me. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family. Not sure if I understood this poem, but I'll definitely read more of your work.  |
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