Open Poetry #3 |
Best Piece of Gum I Ever Bought (or Already A Winner) |
Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Think I will play the lottery Make a million dollars quick But which numbers are the winners? Of which lucky six should I pick? Seventeen ~ the day I was born Can't get much luckier than that Thirty-six ~ one for each year here Better than any lesser stat Now eighteen is a good number In October was our first date And the twenty-second for sure The day we claimed each other mate Number twenty-nine should do fine For the day of my daughter's birth And for my next little girl Number two is a day of worth No better numbers could I pick For this dollar that's in my hand I think I'll buy some gum instead And let the value of them stand |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
: ) I love this Andrew ! : ) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your millions are in the reason behind your numbers. You're a smart man. Nicely done. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Wonderful Andrew! ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Scott, Enjoy the gum your poem was fun. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wonderful my friend....some things are absolutely priceless Not everyone sees riches like you do, may you never run out of blessings to count |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Thank you one and all... I like this piece too... nice and simple with a good message, and its got a minty fresh chew. When I consider all that I have, I'm a pretty wealthy guy. Wouldn't mind a million in the bank, but it would never equal what I got. Have a peaceful weekend yall! [This message has been edited by Andrew Scott (edited 11-02-1999).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow! Wonderful Andrew! I enjoyed this! ------------------ Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Great message here, Andrew> Stick to gum. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I enjoyed this! Keep chewing--you got the right idea. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Now if we could just get the rest of the world to see things as you do. Wonderful work Sir Andrew. You never fail to enlighten or amuse me. (I hope this is a good thing..lol) |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Lady D: You're most welcome, glad you enjoyed Sir Balladeer: Thanks for stopping by my friend. Always a pleasure to see your mark. Martie: I'm just a chewin' fool, but at least I got minty fresh breath Lady Marilyn: Kinder things you could not say. Thank you. To one and all... my deepest appreciation for your comments to this and all my offerings. When ever you need a stick of gum... I your man! [This message has been edited by Andrew Scott (edited 10-30-1999).] |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Andrew: This is superb and the value is priceless.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
RainbowGirl: Thanks... The women in my life are without a doubt priceless. I am three times over the wealthiest man in the world. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Boy was this unique. I loved it Andrew. Really enjoyed this! |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
yep, really liked this one, great perspective, great job in letting us in on it |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
liked this much! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
White Dove, llovit & Watcher: Thank you all for stopping by and leaving your marks. Each is most appreciated... glad you all enjoyed. |
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