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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 1999-10-01 08:09 PM

once asleep,
I awoke to find,
that I had feel asleep
and lost track of time,
You came to me through the darkness of the night,
I could see your eyes glowing as a light.
Your breath warmed my face,
Your touch took me far away from this place.
Am I dreaming? are you real? Is this you that I feel?
I have longed to hold you, to kiss your face,
to be held by your embrace.
Softly you kissed me, I felt your lips slowly touching mine,
Awakened by a dream,
Frozen somewhere in time.
If only I could hold you again,
and show you how I feel,
this fantasy would disappear,
and become real.

Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

1 posted 1999-10-01 08:13 PM

a lost love...........too bad wisdom often comes in hindsight.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 1999-10-01 08:17 PM

Yes it was a lost love...Through death...I often think of him.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-10-01 08:20 PM

Simply beautiful.

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Denise

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 1999-10-01 08:24 PM

Thanks Denise! This one was a bit hard to write

. He was the same age as I and died a year after graduation. So many times I think about him...he was a poet also.

Serain
Junior Member

since 1999-10-16

Posts 17
Gresham, OR

5 posted 1999-10-30 10:01 PM

very sad im sorry
very good
thank you

caroline
Senior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
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6 posted 1999-10-30 10:23 PM

I am very sorry for the loss of your friend, RH. You have penned a lovely poem in his honor. ((Hugs))

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

7 posted 1999-10-31 09:00 AM

I really liked this one

Justina
Junior Member

since 1999-10-31

Posts 24
Kansas City. MO

8 posted 1999-10-31 11:14 PM

I like this! I, in a way, feel you. =)!

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

9 posted 1999-11-02 03:29 PM

So Lovely!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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