Open Poetry #3 |
Isla Mujeres |
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Isla Mujeres Come with me to Isla Mujeres Where steady trade winds blow Oceans blue and crystalline We can finally let love show Unlock the passion inside I’m waiting only for you Meet me beyond the coral reef Ageless amour, old and new We'll sleep in the midday heat Under bright stars, dark sky Make love with abandon Diving into loving eyes Feel the weightless whirling Your spirit surrounding me now Like a jewel, multi-colored Enlightened within, show me how I want to lie in the hot sand Cover you with tender kisses Watch your morning passion grow Grant you three thousand wishes We'll ride horses on windy strands Take a sunset swim at low tide This love, given half a chance Surely cannot be denied And when we return to reality Tell me it will still be this way For if you tell me otherwise On the Isle of Women I shall stay Isla Mujeres Te amo Isla Mujeres © 1999 C.M. Bailey |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
How very nice!!! I liked the use of your words..I could feel the sand and hear the waves on the beach. Good one. ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Robert |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Corinne. I felt like took a vacation to this lovely island. ------------------ Denise |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Loved the imagery! Well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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