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Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
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0 posted 1999-10-29 04:03 PM


Isla Mujeres

Come with me to Isla Mujeres
Where steady trade winds blow
Oceans blue and crystalline
We can finally let love show

Unlock the passion inside
I’m waiting only for you
Meet me beyond the coral reef
Ageless amour, old and new

We'll sleep in the midday heat
Under bright stars, dark sky
Make love with abandon
Diving into loving eyes

Feel the weightless whirling
Your spirit surrounding me now
Like a jewel, multi-colored
Enlightened within, show me how

I want to lie in the hot sand
Cover you with tender kisses
Watch your morning passion grow
Grant you three thousand wishes

We'll ride horses on windy strands
Take a sunset swim at low tide
This love, given half a chance
Surely cannot be denied

And when we return to reality
Tell me it will still be this way
For if you tell me otherwise
On the Isle of Women I shall stay

Isla Mujeres
Te amo
Isla Mujeres

© 1999 C.M. Bailey

© Copyright 1999 Corinne - All Rights Reserved
RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
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1 posted 1999-10-29 07:46 PM


How very nice!!! I liked the use of your words..I could feel the sand and hear the waves on the beach. Good one.

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Corinne
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2 posted 1999-10-30 04:21 PM


Thank you, Robert
Denise
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3 posted 1999-10-31 01:32 AM


This is lovely, Corinne. I felt like took a vacation to this lovely island.

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Denise


Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
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4 posted 1999-11-02 05:13 PM


Loved the imagery! Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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