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Sunshine
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0 posted 1999-10-29 01:15 PM


October Noon

Ah the riotous wind’s in action
on this late October noon,
rustling leaves still cling in trees
still dangle on, but soon

to leave, and pardon the pun
as the leaves dance in the sun,
the rustle is loud upon the street,
a sonata of sound, can’t be beat.

Blow wind blow, leaves circling
as an invisible hand thus stirring
the dried surplus of summer’s day,
all the colors come to play.

Hang on a bit tighter, all fall leaves
for one more weekend I need reprieve
of office walls that bide my soul
until I walk in majesty, again come whole.

29 October, 1999
©KRJ



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© Copyright 1999 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Munda
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1 posted 1999-10-29 05:13 PM


I love the Fall too. Wonderful Sunshine. : )
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2 posted 1999-10-29 05:20 PM


Thank you Munda! We're so fortunate that the world gives us so much to write about...
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3 posted 1999-10-29 05:24 PM


Autumn`is my favorite season also, although it has been quite a while since I've seen it. Thanks for taking me there Sunshine.This is lovely......

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4 posted 1999-10-29 05:25 PM


Sunshine,
Love your mind your words and your sensitivity.

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5 posted 1999-10-29 05:32 PM


Pepper, you may walk with me wherever my heart takes us - so glad you came in for the read.

Sy, what can I say. I leave a Friday behind going forward into tomorrow with a smile on my face, from your kind words.

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6 posted 1999-10-29 09:06 PM


Lovely October Noon and lovely poem too!

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7 posted 1999-10-30 09:06 AM


Thanks Denise, for reading...
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8 posted 1999-10-30 11:00 AM


Sunshine, this is great....I love the fall
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9 posted 1999-10-31 06:50 AM


Thanks Hoot. Enjoy your last day of it, and then we welcome November.
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10 posted 1999-11-02 05:11 PM


Enjoyed the read!

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11 posted 1999-11-02 05:18 PM


Thanks, Watcher, for reading!
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