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Ruby Slippers(lyric)
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Ruby Slippers(lyric) |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN 
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I’M TAKING OFF THESE RUBY SLIPPERS I’VE GIVEN UP ON THE FAIRY TALE I GAVE AWAY MY ROSE COLORED GLASSES I MISSED THE BOAT I DON’T KNOW WHERE THE SHIP IS THAT’S WHY I’M TAKING OFF THESE RUBY SLIPPERS THE GOOD WITCH OF THE NORTH WENT SOUTH FOR THE WINTER LEFT ME HERE AND WOULDN’T TAKE ME WITH HER I WANTED TO GO.. BUT I’M SURE GONNA MISS HER WHEN I TAKE OFF THESE RUBY SLIPPERS SOMEWHERE OVER THE RAINBOW IS MY BACKYARD I KNOW IT’S THERE BUT SOMETHING ABOUT THOSE SHOES , THEY NEVER TELL YOU THEY CAN TAKE YOU HOME BUT ONLY IF YOU WANT TO CLICK YOUR HEELS SAY THE WORDS IT WON’T MAKE A DIFFERENCE TIL YOU TAKE OFF THOSE RUBY SLIPPERS CALL ME A FOOL BUT I KNOW WHERE MY HOME IS AND YOU CAN’T GET THERE FROM HERE I CLICKED MY HEELS SAID THE WORDS IT NEVER MADE A DIFFERENCE TIL I TOOK OFF THOSE RUBY SLIPPERS SOMEWHERE OVER THE RAINBOW SKYS ARE BLUE AND THE DREAMS THAT YOU DARE TO DREAM REALLY DO COME TRUE ------------------ Kay-lynn **A dream is a wish your heart makes :) |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Nicely done. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I really like this....I do have a problem with caps though. This poems speaks loudly enough for itself, no need for caps  |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
sorry about the caps. Didn't even realize it.  |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Very Good! ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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