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RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

0 posted 1999-10-29 07:24 AM

Weave me a dream, Dreamweaver,
Paint my nightime sky.
Help me see with your bleary eyes
Those so very far from mine.
Help me live through long lost loves
and friends so far away.
Help prepare me nightly
For the things I face each day.
Spin me a tale of dreams' then yarn
An emote brave and strong
Then let me rest comforted in those arms
Of love and life and song.
Build me up to face the day
It comes with no regret
For I know that come next eve
You'll be waiting in my bed.
So weave me a dream, Dreamweaver,
Let your loving arms embrace me.
And take me to that shining place
Where your dreams carress me.

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Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 1999-10-29 07:55 AM

Beautiful poem, Robert,

Help me see with your bleary eyes
Those so very far from mine.
Help me live through long lost loves
and friends so far away.

These are some very powerful lines...they sure say alot to me.

Very enjoyable piece.

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Michael Anderson

And after-drunkeness of soul
Succeeds the glory of the bowl -
An idle longing night and day
To dream my very life away

EAP
but a dream within a dream?

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 1999-10-29 09:15 AM

Charming, wistful. Thanks.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 1999-10-29 10:31 AM

RSEvans,
Pleasant to read well done.

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

4 posted 1999-10-29 11:49 AM

Lovelt verse.Enoyed the read!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 1999-10-29 11:49 AM

Nice read RSE...it says more than the words on the screen do, wonderfully voiced

Patrick B
Member

since 1999-10-28

Posts 58
uk

6 posted 1999-10-29 03:51 PM

Very good,I sent it to a friend.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

7 posted 1999-10-29 08:20 PM

I like this one very much! So dreamy!

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Denise

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

8 posted 1999-10-29 11:40 PM

Ooh La La !! I really liked this...it was dreamy in a mysterious sort of way....very nice read! Very very nice title too - - BRAVO!

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale

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