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The Keeper Of Keys
Junior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 39


0 posted 1999-10-02 12:10 PM


A gentle smile and beautiful eyes
They get me each and every time
But this time it stayed
This time it remained

I'm not rightly sure
How to tell you these things
Without making you run away
From the promises I bring

I understand your heart
Is not here
It resides with someone else
This is what I feared

You must feel deeply
For this one lucky guy
He won you over so easy
He didn't have to try

Call it fate
Or whatever you will
But I need not debate
I care for you still

I know deep within
And I think you do too
It'll be more than friends
Between me and you

Label me crazed
For caring so much
I shall not be fazed
By something of the such

Its happiness
That I do wish
For you, fair princess
So, slip me a kiss…

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~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~

To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting.


© Copyright 1999 The Keeper Of Keys - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-10-02 12:23 PM


You've done a wonderful job with this poem Keeper....I loved the last two lines...nicely done!!

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It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt.

Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 1999-10-02 02:28 AM


Keeper, sounds like you're full of mischief here with this one!! I enjoyed this one too!! I hope to read more!! Your poetry seems to always talk about my favorite subject "Love" so well!!

Bridgette



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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart"



The Keeper Of Keys
Junior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 39

3 posted 1999-10-03 10:33 PM


thank you both for your replies, it means so much. it helps to know that you are bringing smiles to peoples faces with your writings.

thanks again

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~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~

To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting.


Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

4 posted 1999-10-03 10:49 PM




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Denise

Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
5 posted 2003-04-14 12:12 PM


Ahhh....Keeper I still enjoy this one.  I'm just digging through the archives tonight.  Hope all is well with you.
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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