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Julie Jordan Scott Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 146Bakersfield, CA USA 
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Take away the degrees Take away the titles Take away the accomplishments What is discovered at your core? What is your special spark? Buried deep, neglected, perhaps you've chosen to ignore? Seeking to please whomever Drowning out pure longings from your heart Struggling, freezing, Suffocating Until finally you choose to start Whispers from the Spirit Siren songs from deep within After dancing, stranger among strangers Claim it! Your Life! Begin! ------------------ Julie Jordan Scott is a Freelance Writer and Public Speaker, but her favorite role is that of Mommy! Visit her website at http://www.5passions.com |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Well done!  ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I do agree with this piece, to a point. ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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startin_fresh Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 137US |
Your words impress upon me That some how some way Within me you can see Your words brighten my day While I'm not the model For this wonderful poem The story that it tells Does strike close to home. I always appreciate the positive tone of your messages both poems and essays. GREAT JOB! ------------------ Courage is the price that life exacts for granting peace with yourself. --Amelia Earhart [This message has been edited by startin_fresh (edited 10-29-1999).] |
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Julie Jordan Scott Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 146Bakersfield, CA USA |
Watcher and Silent, thanks for your kind words! DE, I am intrigued....up to what point do you agree with this piece? I would so enjoy hearing..... |
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R LaClair New Member
since 1999-10-29
Posts 1NY |
Subtle, thoughtful insights, and a positive note to boot....very observant |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Very uplifting! Makes me want to go out and TAKE CHARGE of something! I especially love the last line. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I like the message behind this one |
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