Open Poetry #3 |
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Firsts |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA ![]() |
Firsts When our eyes first met, I was filled with love. When you first smiled at me, Such joy filled my soul. When you first held my hand, Tears came to my eyes. When you first hugged me, My heart melted. And when you kissed me goodbye, I cried inside. Who knew the first day of kindergarten Would be so hard ![]() (This was written for a friend who experienced the trama of her baby's first day of school ![]() ------------------ This is courage...to bear unflinchingly what heaven sends. ~Eurpides |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
That day comes too soon for me Ruth. ![]() ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so touching, Hoot! It brought back such precious memories. (I thought you were writing about me!) ![]() ------------------ Denise |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Very sweet, nice twist at the end. ![]() ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hoot, Cute, enjoyed the read |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
I remember it well. I was never so happy or so sad as that day. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
*smile*...Beautiful indeed Hoot... ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Ruth this is not what I expected. A little twist at the end there. I did the same thing when my littlest one went into kindergarten. I called my mom and just cried. She's in second grade now! And I enjoy the peace and quiet. hehe |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thanks everyone, it's nice to not be quite so serious sometimes ![]() |
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