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Another pantoum from Nan's class. : )
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Another pantoum from Nan's class. : ) |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
It was such a sweet caress on that weary dreary day longing for my bonnie lass solemn grief ate me away On that weary dreary day Death came passing by my door solemn grief ate me away heartache mine forevermore Death came passing by my door looking at my soppy eyes heartache mine forever more bonnie lass she just had died looking at my soppy eyes feeling sorry in a way bonnie lass she just had died said "this is your lucky day" feeling sorry in a way her kiss cold yet sweet to me said "this is your lucky day" your sweet bonnie lass you’ll see her kiss cold yet sweet to me longing for my bonnie lass your sweet bonnie lass you’ll see it was such a sweet caress [This message has been edited by Munda (edited 10-28-1999).] |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
I thought your choice for your beginning/ending line was very well-chosen. I enjoyed this. --Kess ------------------ You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Goed Werk enjoyed. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Skyfyre, thank you and you too Mike. By the way....are you Dutch ??? |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nope... but a lawyer here in Kansas is.. I called him and asked how to say good job... |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Nicely done! Enjoyed the read. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Well done Munda |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful, Munda! I enjoyed this! ------------------ Denise |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Watcher, Ruth, Denise, Thank you so much. : ) and Mike, LOL, thanks ! It sure is different to get a Dutch reply and appreciated a lot. : ) [This message has been edited by Munda (edited 10-30-1999).] |
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