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Lori
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 11
Pulaski,Tn. USA

0 posted 1999-10-28 09:53 AM


No words can I say,
When this feeling of sadness comes over me.
My heart & soul cries out to you.
Feel my love,
The mist around me is falling like rain.
Feel my pain,
The darkness knows our story.
I fear the dark on this night,
I pray to you with all my might.
Come and rescue me,
Fine me at my special place,
So we may walk together once again,
And see the beauty upon this earth,
For when you are beside me,
My heart sings.
When you look upon me,
Your eyes reach deep inside my soul.
You bring life to me,
Like the falling rain upon the earth,
You bring warmth upon my skin,
like the sun rays from above.
I reach out my hand to you,
I long for you to join me,
I long for your love.
I long for the soft whispers of your voice.
I long for your tender carresses.
I long for your kiss.
I long for you to hear the turth.
I long for you to understand these,
Feelings and words I can’t hide.
For there’s no place for them to go.
No more words can I say this night.
As I watch the moon slip away.
For a love I could never forget.


© Copyright 1999 Lori - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-10-28 07:41 PM


Very sad emotions displayed. Filled with longing. Welcome to Passions, Lori!

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Denise


Lori
Junior Member
since 1999-10-28
Posts 11
Pulaski,Tn. USA
2 posted 1999-10-28 08:35 PM


Thank you dsnyder(Denise), Passions can sometimes be wonderful as well as sad.
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-10-28 08:41 PM


Such sadness,you expressed it well.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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