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Lee Benthin Junior Member
since 1999-10-28
Posts 19Marysville, WA USA |
who? who are you kidding? when you tell me, you don' think about me? me. i've got somebody and he tells me, that he needs me so. oh... he and you are driving me wild. you've got me feelin' inside, i'm just a child and he holds my hand, while you hold my heart he understands, but you're tearin' me apart. oh. . . who? who are we kidding? when we say that we, can put out the fire? love. it's just a feeling it starts as attraction, then turns to desire yea. . . who? who am i kidding? when i say that, it don't matter to me? you. you keep me dreaming. maybe someday, all my dreams will come true. oh... he and you are driving me wild. you've got me feelin' inside, i'm just a child and he holds my hand, while you hold my heart he understands, but you're tearin' me apart. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Nicely done. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
wow... this would be a very beautiful song! ------------------ Don't Fall.. Rise in Love -------823------- |
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Lee Benthin Junior Member
since 1999-10-28
Posts 19Marysville, WA USA |
WOW. Thanks everybody. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This would make a great song! Good one, Lee!  ------------------ Denise |
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