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Iloveit
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0 posted 1999-10-27 02:40 PM


"sweetness"

when they made the word
they had you in mind,
you sprinkle my world
with sunshine and smiles
with hugs and smooches

you temper my mind with
questions, quiet ideas, waiting
patiently for me to figure out
my own answers
never judging, always accepting
how did I exist without you?

you sweeten my world,
the thought of you
tastes good in my mind
how did I, with all my weakness
deserve a friend as sweet as you…


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©1999 Iloveit


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Watcher666
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1 posted 1999-10-27 02:51 PM


Lovely!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Toerag
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2 posted 1999-10-27 02:54 PM


Granny...thank you dear...I do try! Oh, wait, ya mean this was directed to someone else?...Okay, never mind....but Iloveit when you're so vulnerable! So? what color panties are ya wearing today?...Or, are you wearing any at all?....

Nice job my dear one and only...you really have become quite a poet yanno?

Verma
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3 posted 1999-10-27 02:56 PM


Ditto " "
Iloveit
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4 posted 1999-10-27 03:02 PM


thanks watcher and verma

and toe??? thank you cutie, you know a compliment from you is a compliment I treasure and dang if I'd known you were gonna ask me what color they were I'd of worn some *g*

Pepper
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5 posted 1999-10-27 03:10 PM


A truly lovely tribute to your friend.
Enjoyed this much Iloveit.......

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!

suthern
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6 posted 1999-10-27 04:14 PM


Ya mean this poem's not about Toe??? (puzzled look) It sure coulda been! *G* (But then I'd have had to use my baseball bat... but then, I'm gonna have to use that anyway after those panties remarks. *EG*)

Great job, Lovey... I like this one much! *G*

RainbowGirl
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7 posted 1999-10-27 04:29 PM


Iloveit: ..This is lovely..

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


Iloveit
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8 posted 1999-10-27 04:35 PM


yep pepper I am lucky to have good friends...glad you liked the poem about this one, he is special for sure

lol@not about toe, yep, sure coulda been, and
now you just keep that bat in its holster, everyone here knows how sweet he is *G* so that can't get me in trouble....can it?

and sheesh, you didn't tell me you could read italics *G* thank you my friend

thank you rainbow girl, hugs back

hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 1999-10-27 06:38 PM


Very nice
Denise
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10 posted 1999-10-27 10:22 PM


Very sweet, lloveit! I enjoyed this!

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Denise

passing shadows
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11 posted 2004-05-16 07:51 PM


aw...that's sweet!
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