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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
"sweetness" when they made the word they had you in mind, you sprinkle my world with sunshine and smiles with hugs and smooches you temper my mind with questions, quiet ideas, waiting patiently for me to figure out my own answers never judging, always accepting how did I exist without you? you sweeten my world, the thought of you tastes good in my mind how did I, with all my weakness deserve a friend as sweet as you… ------------------ ©1999 Iloveit |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Lovely! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Granny...thank you dear...I do try! Oh, wait, ya mean this was directed to someone else?...Okay, never mind....but Iloveit when you're so vulnerable! So? what color panties are ya wearing today?...Or, are you wearing any at all?.... Nice job my dear one and only...you really have become quite a poet yanno? |
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Verma Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 80Midlands, England |
Ditto " " |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
thanks watcher and verma  and toe??? thank you cutie, you know a compliment from you is a compliment I treasure and dang if I'd known you were gonna ask me what color they were I'd of worn some *g* |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
A truly lovely tribute to your friend. Enjoyed this much Iloveit....... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ya mean this poem's not about Toe??? (puzzled look) It sure coulda been! *G* (But then I'd have had to use my baseball bat... but then, I'm gonna have to use that anyway after those panties remarks. *EG*) Great job, Lovey... I like this one much! *G* |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Iloveit: ..This is lovely.. HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
yep pepper I am lucky to have good friends...glad you liked the poem about this one, he is special for sure lol@not about toe, yep, sure coulda been, and now you just keep that bat in its holster, everyone here knows how sweet he is *G* so that can't get me in trouble....can it? and sheesh, you didn't tell me you could read italics *G* thank you my friend thank you rainbow girl, hugs back |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very nice |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sweet, lloveit! I enjoyed this! ------------------ Denise |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
aw...that's sweet! |
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