the spawning of the weasel

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Open Poetry #3

the spawning of the weasel

starchild
Member

since 1999-10-22

Posts 59
manchester, england

0 posted 1999-10-27 07:38 AM

the weasel family gathered round,
the ground.
but there was not a sound,
all around.

grrr the weasel said and cried,
and died.
her body lay right by his side,
but no one spied,
her.

Ohme
Senior Member

since 1999-07-17

Posts 816
Texas

1 posted 1999-10-27 07:47 AM

That you would note the passing of a weasel, I think you must be quite observant and look upon the small things as still important. Nice, I enjoyed it.

Scarlet pimpernel
New Member

since 1999-10-27

Posts 9
Birkenhead,Wirral,England

2 posted 1999-10-27 08:11 AM

Some how I don't think that he actually saw the weasel, did you Starchild? I have never known anyone who has seen a weasel cry and then die. I think he may have been talking about something else.

starchild
Member

since 1999-10-22

Posts 59
manchester, england

3 posted 1999-10-27 08:41 AM

i didn't actually see the weasel but the poem was about the death of rotundo the best clown in the west

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

4 posted 1999-10-27 01:42 PM

Nicely done.

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