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goodbye daddy i love you
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goodbye daddy i love you |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, 
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you visit me from time to time, to assure me your still there, lost above the clouds in heaven, still ive found you somwhere. in my dreams you know me, your beautiful little duaghter, youve missed out on so many years, and regretfully there over. you watch over me i know, becasue i feel you in the night, not to say it doesnt scare me, but somehow it just feels right. you hold me like a child, and wash away my insecurities, with jsut the wishper of your voice, its funny how you seem to know me. your my daddy, that i gave up on, becasue i could never have you back, i talked to you all through the night, though you seldom answered back. you said what needed saying, and told me what i must do, thank you for looking out for us, daddy, goodbye i love you. ------------------ you want me to trust you with my heart, when i cant even trust myself not to let you break it. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Lovely.....liked this much! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
My father passed away last November and with the day coming around again I hope that I can pay tribute to him so eloquently. Truly a heartfelt piece. ------------------ No matter where you go, somebody's probably already been there and gotten the parking space... |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Beautiful, Amber. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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