I Apologize For My Actions

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Lynn
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since 1999-09-20

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Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

0 posted 1999-10-26 05:42 PM

I Apologize For My Actions

I have to admit I'm insecure,
And maybe that's why I acted as I did.
Possibly for the fear of losing you.

Over time, I have corrected many flaws.
Left now, is the fact that I still love you.
Only my heart knows the pain I feel.
God himself, could only imagine it.

Inhale the sweetness of the air, for
Zealous is what I am.
Envious of those receiving your love,
Fainting at the thought of your calm eyes.

Oceans of tears, I have cried,
Regretting not a single moment.
Mourning the loss of your heart.
Years could pass, and still the pain felt.

All I can think about is you,
Caring for another heart and soul.
Taking them in your arms to hold,
Ignoring the thought of my existence.
Obsessed with this thought, I cry.

Nothing has been the same
Since you parted from my life.

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"I Believe we are divine by
nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul
over time. -Jewel

[This message has been edited by Lynn (edited 10-26-1999).]

caroline
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since 1999-08-16

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1 posted 1999-10-26 06:35 PM

Sad poem, Lynn, but very well done. This is a difficult acrostic to pull off, but you've done a wonderful job!

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

Munda
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since 1999-10-08

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The Hague, The Netherlands

2 posted 1999-10-26 06:46 PM

I liked this very much. Well done !

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

3 posted 1999-10-26 06:46 PM

Most sincere and heart felt. I hope the message is heard.

Munda
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since 1999-10-08

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The Hague, The Netherlands

4 posted 1999-10-26 06:50 PM

Sorry Lyn, my computer is playing tricks on me. ; ( Posted it before I had a change to correct it. I meant to say: I liked this accrostic very much. Very well done ! : )

Lynn
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since 1999-09-20

Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

5 posted 1999-10-26 06:55 PM

Caroline & Munda...Thank you very much. This is the first acrostic I have done. Amazingly, it took me only about 20 minutes to write. I did it during my "free period" at school today.

Thank you too Andrew, for the comments....

Lynn
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since 1999-09-20

Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

6 posted 1999-10-26 06:56 PM

Sorry, my computer is messing up!

[This message has been edited by Lynn (edited 10-26-1999).]

Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

7 posted 1999-10-26 08:45 PM

Well done acrostic! Good read here!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

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8 posted 1999-10-26 08:48 PM

Good job, Lynn!

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Denise

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

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9 posted 1999-10-27 09:12 AM

Great Acrostic

passing shadows
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10 posted 2004-05-16 08:01 PM

this is good!

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