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You Never Will Know Pain
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You Never Will Know Pain |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
You Never Will Know Pain You will never know the pain a grieving heart can feel, for you are never saddened never have a wound to heal. You can't feel compassion, all emotion is unknown. A seed of friendship planted you destroy before it's grown. Unconcerned for others, there's no love that you would feed. To live your life so shallow it assures your every need. Life will never do you harm. You never will know pain, for there is nothing you can lose. But nothing will you gain. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ohme, Like it much, good read. |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Ohme...this one really spoke to me. Thank you for sharing ... Could feel the sadness in it. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Cold,shallow people.....know them well.Well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Ohme: I see I'll have to keep an eye out for your material as I've enjoyed what few I've read. One word for this one: machine. Thanks for sharing. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Aren't they sad, people like that. They miss so much of life. Thanks for sharing this. |
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Verma Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 80Midlands, England |
Why do people do what they do ???...it makes think - thanks |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Thanks Seymour, for reading and replying. Julie, Watcher, it is sad, do not understand why some people limit their life to so little. Thanks Andrew. I have already been watching for your work! I enjoy it too. Thanks, Munda, Verma. Sad thing is they don't know what they are missing! Thanks all of you for your comments. [This message has been edited by Ohme (edited 10-26-1999).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, Ohme!  ------------------ Denise |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Maybe not pain, but most assuredly loneliness would find such a person. Very good poem, Ohme, I know some narcistics myself. ------------------ Michael Anderson Is all that we see or seem but a dream within a dream? |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Ohme.. I wish I had writen these words.. I've been thinking them all week long..lol guess there is one in every crowd... Wonderful words and right on time.. lol |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Very well done indeed my friend. This piece likes me it does. ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ohme...what a wonderful post. I really enjoyed this piece |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Had to put ya back on First.. I just love it. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yep....I'm puttin you back on top too....(I like the gals on top yanno?).....Great job. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Great poem, Ohme! Well done! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I think we all know someone like this |
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