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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
I've not ever questioned you I've accepted all that I must do I've never asked the reasons why I've always learned to let things fly I'm so sorry for my weak dismay I'm sorry that I feel this way As always Lord I want to know What road to take what seeds to sow With Your guidance I'll do what's right I pray to you, this lonely night But now "My God" I've come to you I Ask You for Your mercy mild To lay Your Hands upon Your child To not forget this one that loves I pray for your strength and all your love My body weak , and broken down My mind is out there, wondering around My sprits someplace I can't find My soul is off doing time Lord I ask you to recharge my soul This broken dreamers wishful mind Her heart, that's trying to be kind To accept the things she does not know And take the ones, You can't let go My Lord, My God of all that's right I pray to you this cold dark night I come to seek thy tender touch Just touch my mind Lord, so I may know This is my field, that I must sow Guide me with your Mighty hands So I may wake to understand And when my fight is nearly done Let my voice cry your name, to everyone It is in Your name, I ask of You My God, for whom my love is true Amen. Thanks be to God TORI 99 |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
This is wonderful!! I am at a loss for words right now... Absolutely outstanding  ------------------ Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
This is a simply wonderful piece, Tori. ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Beautiful work here.Nicely done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
it is a great example of prayer there is true hope in prayer and in verse i like reading psalms yuh did a fine job tori |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Words from the heart.. Thanks to all of you for the kind words... Just pray for me!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've spoken for just about everyone in this piece. Well done. |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
What else could I say? Amen |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Tori you bring tears to my eyes! I'm praying for you-you know that! Your faith seems strong my friend! I pray that it stays with you, it will hold you through these tough times! I wanted to write something for you here Tori, but the words fail me! I can think of nothing. I know HE's there and watching over you. He hears your crys and he shall hold your hand! God Bless you Tori! |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Thank You Sunshine I am gald that you've found something in my prayer that has touched you... Ohme I agree... and say it so many times in the course of my days.. WhtDov.. I know that place that the words get stuck in..... think we all do but honestly, knowing I'm in your paryers... Does give me a feeling of Peace...and helps keep my faith strong.. Thanks my friend.....you are in mine as well... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tori, Keep the faith, well done. |
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Lady in Waiting New Member
since 1999-10-26
Posts 1 |
Tori this was so beautiful I can't tell you how it has touched me. Thanks for sharing this one |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Tori....now I'm sure that at least once you've read one of my pieces of garbage, and I'm sure you've noticed what a deeply religious type'a guy I am...LOL....but this was indeed beautiful.....a job/prayer/poem well done!!!!!!!!!! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Beautifully done Tori. You will be in my prayers..... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Thanks Pepper, Lady and Toerag!! And Yes Toe... I've read some good stuff there I still laugh when I think of the battle of Toe and Baladeer |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Simply beautiful. ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wonderful tori |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Thank you so much Ruth and Denise.. |
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