Open Poetry #3 |
One Eyed Willie |
tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Ok this is for all who said my poetry was getting to sad.....lol ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ A yellow bellied One Eyed Willie Made his way to Pick-a-Dilly With much joy to his surprise He met there many other One Eyed guy's Who told of mystic journey's had Even told some times of sad For weeks and months they told their tales How those yellow bellied One Eye's whaled They laughed and hooted with no end With their yellow bellied One Eyed friends So if you come to Pick-a-Dilly don't be shocked By the One Eyed Willies Just get your rest before you come With One Eyed Willies there wont be none They hoot and holler through the night A One Eyed Willie paradise~ They will laugh all night and make you silly When you hang out with One Eyed Willie's Tori 99 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one dropof ink vlh. |
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thursdayschild Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 169Houston, Tx. |
Cute! Thanks for the laugh! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
ok gettin lil excited here YOU MEAN THEY STILL GOT PICADILLYS they left my part o texas when i was a kid o the purple jello where do you live send me a plane ticket and a gift certificate!!! good stuff tori ! |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
thanks thrusday!! Ok Walt. the GC is on the way.. but the plane ticket well bud... ya gona have to spring for it.... lol |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Liked this much!! Too cute! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Thanks Watcher, Glad you enjoyed!! |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Got a giggle out of this one. Thanks, it is cute. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Tori this was great, and humurous! But had I known what I know now, I wouldn't have said that about being so sad! HUGS Great one! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tori, Enjoyed the humor, well done. |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Happy I could get a giggle Ohme...!! WhtDove... Don't think like that.. otherwise I may have held it inside.. and I think I would be about ready to Pop..lol. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Ok Tori, we wouldn't want you to do that! Check your email! Love ya! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Hillarious! Thanks for the laugh! ------------------ Denise |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Glad I could bring a smile Denise!! |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Long live the One-Eyed-Willies! This one tickled me, though I maintain that I am not ticklish in the least. Well done. --Kess ------------------ You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end. |
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