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sparrow
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0 posted 1999-10-25 04:11 PM


Wrote

Writing is just a thing I do
to pass the time and use my pen
because it's not as used as it had been
Just remember pens have feelings too

I write of thoughts and dreams I have
as I lay me down to sleep
and  of course  I have to keep
everything that is happy  well wrote  and sad

We have but time to write
and dream  and love  and live
So I wrote


Copyright 1998

This one is really old, and not all that good, but I figured I'd display something I've never really shown before.

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© Copyright 1999 sparrow - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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1 posted 1999-10-25 04:50 PM


Nicely done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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2 posted 1999-10-25 08:48 PM


Interesting.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."


sparrow
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3 posted 1999-10-25 10:57 PM


Really?

I happen to like the "pens" line, but the rest of it seems rather bland to me.

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Nan
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4 posted 1999-10-26 07:19 AM


It's not old to us if we haven't seen it, sparrow... Nice one..
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