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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
I've not had much time to write lately...but I do slip in and read as much as possible. This is my thanks to all of you who make it so comforting to be here.  Word Weavers Dip your pen into my heart Scribe your impassioned words For in the lines you write I see my soul displayed as art Your poetry is every season turning Days and nights, the sun, the moon It is the smile of every child It's the sigh of a lover's yearning You light up my dreams with stardust through verses drawn with grace You take me on magic carpet rides You laugh and cry and trust I wear each letter strung like pearls jewels of immeasurable worth Keepsakes for a lifetime precious as a baby's curls Weaver of words with your quill you paint without a brush Every line creates a sight That lingers with me still © caroline 1999 ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Caroline...where have you been? I have missed you so much and all of your beautiful poetry. Hope to see more of you. oh... I loved this piece...your words mean much. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Almost all our misfortunes in life come from the wrong notions we have about the things that happen to us. >Stendhal |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
From the lips of a bard, across my heart, and into my soul. Thank you for your introspect and praise, dear lady. But what is a poet less a dreamer of words,and into that dream we drift... ------------------ On the wings of day-bright dreams... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
"I wear each letter strung like pearls...." That's beautiful, Caroline. Good to see you around. You are missed. ------------------ There's two theories to arguin' with a woman. Neither one works. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
caroline, we have missed you on here. What a welcome back poem to post though. This was very well told, I enjoyed it a lot. Love the line Balladeer pointed out and also: Your poetry is every season turning ------------------ This is courage...to bear unflinchingly what heaven sends. ~Eurpides |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
A very beautiful tribute..... Loved this much Caroline..... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Liked this much!! Well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This caught my heart and closed it in the friendships that poems make. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Caroline: You Too! |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Caroline, you should include yourself in your verse as you do the same for us all. ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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IsabelleSkye Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 253 |
This was lovely. Very nice use of words...to describe an emotion felt......You're just a "Word Weaver!" Izzzzzzzy ------------------ "With love's light wings did I o'er-perch these walls; for stony limits cannot hold love out; and what love can do that dares love attempt." Romeo & Juliet Act II |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
How nice to see you caroline - and with a wonderful work to grace us... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Caroline. ------------------ Denise |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
The thanks go to all of you who inspired this piece...I've missed you too! ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
What can I say except brilliant, the words flow so well as if strung together one by one as if it were a peal necklace. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Caroline, I have missed hearing from you. This is beautiful....and I agree with Dream, you have have given much to all of us. ------------------ Michael Anderson Is all that we see or seem but a dream within a dream? |
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