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sparrow Junior Member
since 1999-10-22
Posts 33 |
Swallowed Ring Go to the color Paris but beware Violet doesn't feel Jane meets John on occasion The nasty word is two Up, the next level but beware The stairs go down, also Dimonds slip on occasion Smiles sometimes break ------------------ Sparrow Hawk Jester of http://www.scribedesigns.com/archflambeoth/ |
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sparrow Junior Member
since 1999-10-22
Posts 33 |
wow this is a busy forum... ------------------ Sparrow Hawk Jester of http://www.scribedesigns.com/archflambeoth/ |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions. Yes this is a busy forum and you are most welcome. I enjoyed this piece. It speaks volumns in few words. Looking forward to more of your work. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Sparrow, I may just be having a blonde moment, LOL but would you please help me understand this piece - it went right over my head ! (I'm short, too!) It is very beautiful, the way it's written, but I'm afraid I don't understand what it's about....(hanging head in shame) hehe Please enlighten me if you will.....I'd love to know the story behind such a unique piece! Thanks !! ------------------ ~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale |
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sparrow Junior Member
since 1999-10-22
Posts 33 |
hmm.. well I guess I could try to break it down a bit, but it will probably lose a lot of the hidden meanings when you bring some of them to the front... "Go to the color Paris" Isn't Paris the city of love? "Violet doesn't feel" If Paris = Love, Violet might = Lust "Jane meets John" Girl meets Guy "The nasty word is two" Most aren't looking for commitment "Up, the next level" the good part of advancing a relationship "The stairs go down, also" the bad part of advancing a relationship "Dimonds slip" Remember the title? replaced "swallowed" with "flushed" "Smiles sometimes break" Everything always starts with a smile, well most of the time anyway, but what do they end with? ------------------ Sparrow Hawk Jester of http://www.scribedesigns.com/archflambeoth/ |
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