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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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Hunger hinders healing hours Sick, since Sunday sitting still Feeling funny; funky flowers Spread the sickening smell of swill Coughing crudely, crying coarsely Sending swirling sneezes still Moaning meekly, missing mostly Sultry sunlight’s silent spill ------------------ I fell in love and kept on falling |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Hope you're feeling better soon!  Great poem! ------------------ Denise |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Awwww feel better! Liked this! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thanks, I hope you know the Muse is contageoues, so keep away from the screen! |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Wish you better health quickly. |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Ohmy! thanks Ohme! |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
"Sultry sunlight's silent spill" These words flowed like silk off my tongue as I read them. A beautiful line and a lovely poem as well. --Kess ------------------ You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end. |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Sounds like you have that nasty cold that's going around...hope you feel better soon. Nice work on the poem. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Almost all our misfortunes in life come from the wrong notions we have about the things that happen to us. >Stendhal |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Feel better soon, my friend And throw out those funky flowers! Sounds like they are past their prime! LOL ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Keep your distance there Master...don't wish to be sick for next week Get well soon |
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