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Peeping Tom |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Peeping Tom you call me Each and everyone I see Ever will you want to know? Perhaps the real me I'll come to show In turning of the wheel Not a one of you will feel Gaining momentum with each turn Tonight's Watchers time to burn Only a few of you know My heart which I never show I see far into the night So little is there left to fight Friends follow where I go Even those who do not know My mind not and neither my heart A day a night, a time to start Lament for a day lost Each carries it's own cost ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great acrostic Watcher! And great poem too!  ------------------ Denise |
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EnglishRose Junior Member
since 1999-10-08
Posts 13 |
really good job, liked it a lot sis, |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
'Tis well done indeed my friend. ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Very nice poem...I really need to watch for acrostics, because this is the second time I never would have noticed it if a reply didn't point it out. BTW....I don't have my ICQ yet, but I am at home, on the comp (duh), listening to my mom snore, and cursing AOL. ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Watcher, you made it look so easy I might want to try it myself. But I know I would have problems starting each line with correct letter. Very nicely done. As you can tell I am envious of your ability. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Thank-You all for reading.Glad you enjoyed the read! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Watcher, Good job enjoyed the read. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Nice job, Watcher. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Your final couplet says it beautifully, Watcher.. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
This is excellent! I agree with Nan on your final couplet ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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Don Juan de Feu Junior Member
since 1999-10-15
Posts 25 |
yessssssssss!! DJ |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Great poem Watcher. Enjoyed the read. ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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