Open Poetry #3 |
Am I alone? |
RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
In wanting a longing glance to feel it's only you that's he or she can see to know the best was made of every single chance to feel that wobble right behind your knees To receive letters penned with ink of love to know they'll be whispered in your ears to know that trust is felt deep inside your heart to know you'll share secrets without any fears To hear the words "I love you" when there's no one else around to see it from deep within their eyes and yet your ears hear no sound To walk into your home and smell flowers on nothing more than an ordinary day just to say you're thought and cared for in someone's very special way To know that you'd share meals by candle-light with hands that lovingly prepared to know your worries are being thought of to see eyes light up just because you're there To know you think of each other as truly special friends with a link that goes from heart to heart to know you have each other and on that you can depend To know, is what made you friends right from the very start.... ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 10-22-1999).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Rainbow, Wow, this is beautiful, love it ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
RainbowGirl: I loved this! ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Almost all our misfortunes in life come from the wrong notions we have about the things that happen to us. >Stendhal |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
This is beautiful, Rainbow. And, no, you're not alone in feeling this way. ------------------ Michael Anderson Is all that we see or seem but a dream within a dream? |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Thank you..and it's good to know I'm not alone.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Nope! You are definitely not alone! Very lovely Rainbow! ------------------ Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Uh, do you mean in England, or all over the world? LOL! Kidding, Rainbow. Of course you're not alone. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Lovely....and your not alone. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful...and Rainbow, as long as you have friends, you are never alone |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ahem! Are you forgetting Mother Hen? *G* Never alone, dear friends... even if the hugs may be far away! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
dsnyder: Thanks HUGS Balladeer: ROFL HUSG Watcher: Thanks. HUSG Hoot: Friends sure help.. HUGS Suthern: Thanks Mother Hen. HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
well Rainbow girl, am taking you back to the top with me so you will know you aren't alone ......beautiful poem |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
well Rainbow girl, am taking you back to the top with me so you will know you aren't alone ......beautiful poem |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Truly beautiful, Rainbow. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
Well, to be original I would have to answer yes ... but that wouldn't be true ... so, I'm dittoing everybody ... you're not alone |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Lovely! Beautiful way with words here, RG. |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Absolutely beautiful... Yes, one more :P lol As I grow up, I find it harder and harder to be without what you write of... I remember what it was like to have that, and I long so much to find it again But the search is long and tiresome it seems lol Truly outstanding Rainbow ------------------ Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Thanks all..Guess we all share the same dreams and have the same needs HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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