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hot like the waves
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hot like the waves |
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starchild Member
since 1999-10-22
Posts 59manchester, england |
the world conspired against our love, my love my angel devil child your velvet soft and heavy eyes and my thoughts touched on your desires we ran down to the ocean, in search of eden we found each other by the shore strange emotions in the darkness that was hot like the waves that called us in and our blood filled lips ready to carress our body down we went our insane body a world away from jealous eyes and sleeping now sleeping slowly and gently we could never be this way out there |
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Julie Jordan Scott Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 146Bakersfield, CA USA |
Eloquently spoken with relatively few words....they dance on the page, delighting the senses, I can see vividly the picture you paint. ------------------ Julie Jordan Scott is a Freelance Writer and Public Speaker, but her favorite role is that of Mommy! Visit her website at http://www.5passions.com |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
I totaly agree with JJS... this is picture perfect and if you would not mind I've got a place for this one my friend.. !! |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Great imagery here...liked this much! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I liked the imagery in this piece a lot  |
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