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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
is not the boat cast out to sea.. is not the island i appear to be is not as happy as my smile would seem is not the man so lost in your dreams.. is not the answer, not the sound is not the being that was once so profound.. is not lost inside this wall of sound... ------------------ |
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Emmy Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 194KY |
I have a feeling there's a lot in this poem that's a little to deep for me to grasp. I feel like I'm missing out on something here! But for the most part, very well done. I love the simplicity in the way you put it together and worded it (it's more beautiful that way I think) but the meaning behind it is anything but simple. Wanna share? I'd love to hear it from you... ---Emmy |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Eloquent verse.Nicely done. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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