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dave appleby
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since 1999-10-21
Posts 5
manchester, england

0 posted 1999-10-21 10:07 AM


the meadow is sweet today, all the colours of a freak january bloom
goodbye dry words and soft kisses, fingertips that hover and words as hollow as the sky
it's a new fresh season
monsoon
reprise from the parched summer where my desire swam among empty pleasure to find a home
the wine red sea throws its challenge to the shore and blind lovers entwine themselves in their fantasy
through my veins the night surges black blood on my crimson lips
addicted to the shadows i step into the street listening for the carousel and children laughing
sharp and ready i absorb the world
i can do anything (regards to the lizard king)
the west is the best, he was right
dull skies hide their armours from me but no use
goodbye, i'm gone

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desperado
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since 1999-05-24
Posts 312
FT Hood,Tx
1 posted 1999-10-22 02:21 PM


a rather nice piece here. like the way the images form, yet it really doesn't impact me at all. almost like watching some thing happen through fog. did it really happen at all?
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