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JuLiEt
Junior Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 44
Abbotsford,British Columbia, Canada

0 posted 1999-07-05 10:35 AM


Cool breezes rush across my back,
I stare deep into your eyes,
The feelings are all coming back,
The stars hide, in the deep forboding skies.

Love gone wrong,
Hate gone right,
Why do you do this,
Please not this night.

Think about what you do,
You don't love me like,
You used to,
I tried with all my might.

Don't wipe my tears away,
I can't bare this pain,
The feelings are much too strong,
Much too strong again.

No,I won't let you hurt me like this,
Not another time,
You hurt me bad a year ago,
I feel dirty, and full of grime.

I get up to go,
But you pull me down,
Your strength just much too strong,
You pull me to the ground.

You begin to undress me,
But I push you away,
You hit me hard,
I start to cry.

Don't do this please!
You've punished me enough,
Go away,
You are full of faulty love,

You kiss my neck,
And then my breasts,
And lower you still go.

I'm sweating now,
With drops of tears,
Forming in the night sky.

Someone must be watching him,
No one would leave me here
To die.

Not this night,
My special night,
My prom night,
My hurtful night.



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~*JuLiEt*~

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Sheila
Junior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 23
Lansing, Michigan, Ingham
1 posted 1999-07-05 10:47 AM


I don't even know what to say!! My mother instincts are in high gear for you right now! Hope you have or are healing. Very high impact poem...same happened to me, not easy to deal with. Thanks for the poem!
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