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Ominous
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since 1999-07-04
Posts 68
Canada

0 posted 1999-07-04 05:24 AM


Why is it that life isn't always
fair?
Things, people and ideas always seem
more than you can bear.

When things liek drugs begin
to take over your life,
And everywhere you turn someone's
handing you a knife.

When you look into the mirror,
and a stranger stares back,
Originality and identity,
are things you may lack.

When you love someone,
who doesn't love you,
You're world begins to fall apart
and there's nothing you can do.

Where do they lie,
the spiders from your past?
These hideous demons,
your mind has outcast.

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I am but a shadow, lost within this world of darkness

© Copyright 1999 MysticMyst - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-07-05 10:31 AM


A heavenly slice of hell, I'm still looking forward to more.

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I am not responsible for how you choose to interpret what I say.



Ominous
Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 68
Canada
2 posted 1999-07-06 12:38 PM


Thank you DreamEvil. You have been a great motivator for me.
Ominous
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since 1999-07-04
Posts 68
Canada
3 posted 1999-07-26 03:12 AM


=)
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