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Ominous
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since 1999-07-04
Posts 68
Canada

0 posted 1999-07-08 02:40 AM


Sometimes you feel like you're living
In the bottom of a whole.
Separated from all the world.

Or in the middle of a war where the
Coldeness you receive,
Makes your blood run cold.

And when the power to conquer
Your hate, rule your fears,
And recieve the love you dream of,
Is all in your sights, just not
In your possesion.

and when your living in a world,
Full of hate and despair.
Fighting for freedom, and understanding,
A war you can't possibly win.

A war within yourself.

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I am but a shadow, lost within this world of darkness

© Copyright 1999 MysticMyst - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-07-08 03:07 AM


This actually seems hopeful, to me. I like it.

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I am not responsible for how you choose to interpret what I say.



Ominous
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since 1999-07-04
Posts 68
Canada
2 posted 1999-07-26 03:09 AM


I can never express my full thanks to you Dream.
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