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Open Poetry #1

Cloud of Tears©

Genea
Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 321
USA

0 posted 1999-07-02 03:03 PM

I thought this time it would be different between you and me,
But once again you’ve proved, you can’t let her be.
Now I sit here by myself, holding onto pain,
As I listen to the rain calling out your name.
A cloud of tears I’ve cried, since you said goodbye.

You told me it was over, told me she had gone away.
But you made a choice, that was all you would say;
The day you turned from me when you left on the train.
All I could do was listen to the rain calling out your name.
A cloud of tears I’ve cried, since you said goodbye.

My life will go on
I WILL survive again
But when the showers start,
I find that’s when I listen to the rain calling out your name.
A cloud of tears I’ve cried, since you said goodbye.

Krystal
Member

since 1999-06-19

Posts 140
Shelton,WA USA

1 posted 1999-07-02 03:18 PM

Very nice... I can relate. Good work!

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Shannon D. Montgomery
("Krystal")

Genea
Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 321
USA

2 posted 1999-07-02 04:25 PM

Thanks for the comment!

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