Friends And Lovers - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #1

Friends And Lovers

Cinderella
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 152
Arizona

0 posted 1999-07-02 04:01 AM

You are my best friend and always will be,
We shared so many things on so many days
I thank you for everything and choosing me
We are so similar in our thinking ways.

Too bad we live so many miles apart
For it would be so wonderful and nice,
Your being close would make my heart
So happy and warm there is no price...

When friendships come only once in awhile,
And you my dear have come into my life
Especially when you make me laugh or smile.
It would be a thrill to be your loving wife!

Looking foward to the next fifty years
Of a devoted relationship filled with love.
Knowingly this would last with no fears
For God would watch over us from above.

We have expressed our love to each other
And this could go on forever I am sure,
Wouldn't it be nice to be a father and mother?
For marriage is sacred and surely will endure.

So many things during our years on this earth
Bringing up children and teaching them right
We can together watch while I give birth
Wouldn't that be a marvelous, glorious sight?

We can share something that takes only two,
So simple it seems but nature will help us!
We can start as soon as we say "I do"
For I am old-fashioned and this is a must.

We'll promise to love, honor and obey
Exchanging rings will not be amiss
As couples do on their wedding day
And then we will seal our vows with a kiss!

[This message has been edited by Cinderella (edited 07-02-99).]

jfreak
Member

since 1999-06-17

Posts 306
Yuma, AZ, USA

1 posted 1999-07-02 04:12 AM

Bravo to oldfashionedness. I am a twenty year old male in the Marines and I am proud to say that I am still a virgin. I plan on staying that way until I seal "MY" vows with a kiss. Keep your standards high. Don't let them fall. Your poem is great. Flows beautifully, rhyme and scheme are great. Keep up the great work.

JFreak

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.