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Open Poetry #1

Bulls vs. Vikings

one voice
Junior Member

since 1999-06-29

Posts 38
Billings, MT USA

0 posted 1999-07-01 05:36 AM

I saw you standing by the wall.
You were dressed in black and white,
decorated with your half-smoked cigarette.

I saw you through the crowd-
it was as though it was only you and I for that split second-
the was you always made life seem...only you and I...

You controlled my thoughts, my feelings, my voice, my life.
You lived my life for me...

I loved you only because you manipulated me to do so, and because of that,
I hate you.

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-07-01 05:48 AM

Concise and very powerful. I like it.

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Patience is a virtue, but virtue has never been one of my redeeming qualities.

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