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blue eyes
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since 1999-07-01
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eureka ca,u.s.a

0 posted 1999-07-01 04:46 AM


a walk down the beach alone......wind in my hair,tears in my eyes,sand under my feet,pain in my heart,despear in my soul.....wanting your touch,needing your love......desperate to hold you...craving to make love to you.....weak from crying,and needing just to rest from the confusion,and heartache.....i stand alone,feeling unsure of your feelings for me....needing to hear your loving words once again....dreaming of the day when we meet again,and hoping that your your will leap for joy,as i know without a doubt that mine will,just to embrace your tender touch....God help me for i have fallen deeply,and madly in love with you....
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one voice
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since 1999-06-29
Posts 38
Billings, MT USA
1 posted 1999-07-01 05:45 AM


Oh have I felt this ache so many times... I had tears in my eyes reading this... Wonderful expression... thank you for sharing these emotions.

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~one voice~

***For myself I Live,
Live intensely and am fed by life,
and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression
of that. -Henry James

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