Nar'el, narel burns this night

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Nar'el, narel burns this night

Artur Hawkwing
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since 1999-06-30

Posts 444
USA

0 posted 1999-06-30 08:05 PM

Nar'el, nar'el burns this night,
'fire star' it means, although bright,
through folklore I look above
through yearless eyes at stars I love;

Nar'el, nar'el burns this night,
golden stars of fire, of ire, of light,
where elvish dreams doth rest
above rimming moon shining acrest;

Nar'el, nar'el burns this night,
'round green trees, 'round the sky,
where midnight masses gather
and sing of things proud and fair;

Nar'el, nar'el burns this night,
flame in the void, light in darkness
amidst red rocks lifeless
and river glimmering rideless;

Nar'el, nar'el burns this night,
a river in the sky, a stairway to heaven,
amidst dank pebbles in the stream
as moonlight strikes the land with a beam;

Nar'el, nar'el burns this night,
in the ancient tongue of Elvish maidens,
from Isildur, 'dark moon'
to 'Queen of the Stars', Elbereth;

Nar'el, nar'el burns this night,
a remnant of times lost, of old,
of music played by harps, of celestial songs,
the stars which conquer all, still longs;

Nar'el, nar'el burns this night,
Nar'el, nar'el burns this night.

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Artur Hawkwing.... 'The grave is no bar to my call.' Horn of Valere

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 1999-06-30 09:41 PM

This is really very interesting, Artur - I can't wait to read more - Keep posting...
WELCOME ABOARD

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Elizabeth

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since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

2 posted 1999-07-01 11:28 PM

Very good! I like it a lot. It flows well.

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