Open Poetry #1 |
fading |
ALWAYS TO BLAME New Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 4San Diego |
This face that was once so clear to her is now slowly fading away the memory of his touch just seems to fill her body with pain. But life goes on as it never ends and the day he left plays over and over again. A long glance with so much meaning was all she recieved. No words exchanged, none really needed because sometimes the most powerful words one can say, are those left unspoken. This memory is so vivid in her mind but it's his face that she can't seem to find. As much as she remembers, as hard as she tries she can't fight whats happening inside. She is starting to forget, they are slowly fading further and further away from one another. To spare these feelings, to save them from this pain he must return. He must return before his already fading face, fades out of her memory forever. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
beautiful expression of feelings for someone you once loved. |
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ac Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 129Cayey, PR - USA |
Always to Blame...i liked this...but look at this way, if he doesn't return, perhaps he's not worth remembering.... |
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ALWAYS TO BLAME New Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 4San Diego |
wow AC I never thought of it that way before. I think there is some truth there...thanx |
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ac Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 129Cayey, PR - USA |
Glad to share the insight...there have several faces i've forgotten in my life...looking back it wasn't, a moment too soon... |
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ac Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 129Cayey, PR - USA |
Glad to share the insight...there have been several faces i've forgotten in my life...looking back it wasn't, a moment too soon... [This message has been edited by ac (edited 06-30-99).] |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
Thanks for posting this poem, it reminded me that sometimes as much as you want to hold on, memories, eventually must be allowed to fade. If they dont you let your heart live in the past, becuase the future doesnt include the person you were living it for. |
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