Open Poetry #1 |
~of songs when I was young~ |
Red Letter Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 85Allentown, PA |
~of songs when I was young~ from a breaking chorus this turning point scratching red into the skins of songs I once knew when rebellion was a true confession when fading away was a compliment the instability of lies and lying and I am lying in this puddle of my own self-denial in the basement thoughts that cower in cobwebs so certain that I have gone off in tinkerbell flights of fancy I wish I could stay gone in the innocence of sweetest breath and sugar candy kisses exploding silently an indication of my sadness for my wanting of you this truly I know |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Red, This is the best I've seen your work (with one exception) Very clever word usage and manipulation. Great effort. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow..I like this |
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