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My Heart of Hearts
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My Heart of Hearts |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
With matchless beauty and feline's grace She strolls a gentle mile in my mind Silk white skin and an angel's face My innocent heart of hearts she finds With mystic eyes and coal dark mane She speaks words with lips red satin lace Her voice calls a gentle spring rain My heart of hearts pounds a frantic pace With careful hands of charity She turns the key to desire's door The lock gives to her willingly My heart of hearts will stand bared no more Oh, bestow to me your sweet kiss Set my fettered soul to soar Enfold me with your kind caress That my heart of hearts will be forever Yours |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Well done, Andrew ~ I like it....  |
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Christina Myers Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 159 |
a very lovely and loving poem. thank you for posting  now I'll have a smile on my face all day...-C |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
"Oh, bestow to me your sweet kiss Set my fettered soul to soar" ______________________________________ Sighs, this is beautiful and romantic, just the way I like it!  |
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Alejandro New Member
since 2010-05-29
Posts 6 |
With careful hands of charity She turns the key to desire's door The lock gives to her willingly My heart of hearts will stand bared no more very well spoken, inspirational. |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
I would have to agree with Alejandro that that third stanza has some magic in it. `My heart of heart will standed barred no more` is a worthy line. |
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busysweetmom New Member
since 2010-10-27
Posts 2 |
I really enjoyed reading it.The flow was good. |
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