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IsabelleSkye
Member

since 1999-06-27

Posts 253

0 posted 1999-06-29 10:40 PM

If I Sin

If I sin
In my love
For you
So be it
Let the smell
Of brimstone's tang
Fill me
If I do wrong
Lay the blame
If loving you
Constitutes a sin
Let me burn
If yearning for your touch
Makes my soul impure
Point the finger
Cast the stone
If this love is so wrong
If I sin
In my love
For you
So be it

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

1 posted 1999-06-29 10:50 PM

If going after what we crave
Brands us as a sinner
They can lie us in a single grave.
What would you like for dinner?

(For a sinner, the way you write is heavenly)

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

2 posted 1999-06-29 11:06 PM

I may not be the first to jump in, but I'll be there with a fine bottle of wine. My compliments to the chef.

Andrew

Colin
Senior Member

since 1999-06-05

Posts 596
Callington, Cornwall, England

3 posted 1999-06-30 04:52 AM

Is true love a sin? If so, I'm right there, sinning with you.... always.
YOUR Eric

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 1999-06-30 09:24 AM

Izzy....
Eric has found you - What a man!!!

elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

5 posted 1999-07-16 05:51 PM

"Would I were free from this restraint, or else had hope to win her! Would she could make of me a saint or I of her a sinner!"...these borrowed words seem to be a fitting reply

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Childhood Memories...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...stolen hours...devotion...Master...apart...

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

6 posted 1999-07-16 07:01 PM

Isabelle..
Excellent piece of work. It says a great deal in very few words. The flow has a life of it's own and everything just works together in this one. Bravo!!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

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