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Open Poetry #1

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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 1999-06-28 02:46 PM

Cool round globe that talented hands conceived
Its inner workings and mysteries are weaved
Throughout the colors seem magical and fine
And an eternity sets forever permanently in time.

Ah, are you a magical globe or just a wave of light
That transfers colors of morning and night
Into a shape changing forever true
As I spin you around…I haven’t a clue.

The deeper recesses of your middle cause
Me to gaze intently without pause
And with childlike glee I smile upon the globe’s shine
And thank the talented hands for making it mine.

Newguy
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since 1999-06-27

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Moultrie, GA, USA

1 posted 1999-06-28 03:16 PM

This poem had very very good word use. I enjoyed it

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2000-06-19 12:29 PM

Ah newguy, better a late thank you than never to have seen or said it! Thanks!

Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-01-03 02:08 PM

it's nice to go back in the archives, to see how people have changed in writing...

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