Open Poetry #1 |
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One Thing |
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Moonlight Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 105Auburn, Alabama USA |
If I could see but one thing I would fill my eyes with yours. The cool green pools of you Show me the thoughts your words obscure. And when I close my eyes We'll share the things you dream of as you sleep. I'll peer inside your fantasy To read your silent yearnings. If I could hear but one thing I would hear every word you say. I'd let your words fill up my soul To comfort me when you're away. And when you whisper "I love you" You'll have captured my heart for your own Because the sound of your voice Is sweeter than any I've ever known. (*sigh* new, but reminiscent of the past) ------------------ www.auburn.edu/~fergum1 ~*Only when it is dark enough can you see the stars*~ |
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Augchic711 Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 80O'Fallon, IL, USA |
How awesome! You indeed have talent and I'm glad u became a member here I look forward to hearing ur poetry and hope u enjoy mine! Have a good week and good luck on ur new writings. *******Augchic711******* |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Moonlight, shining bright, once again you show your worth tonight. I'm glad you didn't sleep, solely for this piece of yourself. I hope you sleep in the arms of angels this night. [This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 06-28-99).] |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
This should be closer to the top. |
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Christina Myers Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 159 |
Moonlight- lovely poem. I love "show me the thoughts of your words obscure.." there is just something so *poetic* about that... -Christina |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Hmmm....this is best read in bed by candlelight..such romantic poetry! Welcome to the family. I look forward to reading more. ![]() |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Beautiful! There is a song, "moonlight Becomes You". Well, it certainly becomes us having you as a member...and I'm glad. |
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Moonlight Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 105Auburn, Alabama USA |
thank you all ![]() ------------------ www.auburn.edu/~fergum1 ~*Only when it is dark enough can you see the stars*~ |
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ac Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 129Cayey, PR - USA |
this is incredibly beautiful...very touching for something that is just a memory of the past... |
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